Radio Play Script: Second Draft

The Stranger

This is the story of a teenage girl whose life was going smoothly.
Her name was Lauren and she was always on the computer.... in the daytime, after school, she was in an Internet cafe' and in the evening she was at home. If she had homework from school or something to study, she was used to do everything at school or late in the night.
One day she was in the Internet cafe' ( sound effect of a crowd place and someone typing something at the computer) (the noise of a crowd and of a door that opens and closes frequently goes through out the story) when she signed up on a website that changed her life. That website was "FACEBOOK". while Lauren was using Facebook one of her friends entered in the cafe to greet her.(sound effect of a door that opens)

Friend: "hi darling are you Ok?"
Lauren: "Yeah"
Friend: "What are you doing?"
Lauren: "Ooh I am using Facebook....I just signed in.....I think you too have to join it"
Friend: "Yeah maybe...but not today...you know some people, and I repeat, some people spend some hours for studying."
Lauren: "Ok sweetie bye" "go and study!" ( sound effect of a door that opens and closes)

After a while she started having many friends on it.
That day she received a friend request from someone who claimed to be her friend. She accepted the request.
He wrote her sweet things and liked it.

Lauren: " Ooh this guy is so sweet! No one have ever been so nice with me!"

She believed all his words. (there is a pause: the sound of the crowd and the of the door stops)
One day he decided to meet her........in his house.

When her friend heard it she continued telling Lauren: "Don't go, you don't really know who he is ..Don't go...".

Every time her friend said like this Lauren always replied saying " don't worry...", and at the end her friend quitted.
But she like him and trusted him so much that she decided to go.
That day she left home in time. She entered in his house ( slowly the door shuts) Bang!!.........and never came out.

THIS IS THE SECOND DRAFT FOR THE RADIO PLAY SCRIPT.