Monday 30 November 2009

THIRD DRAFT FOR RADIO PLAY SCRIPT

Some days later Lauren's friend heard it she continued telling Lauren: "Don't go, you don't really know who he is ..Don't go...".
some days later lauren's friend called her on her mobile: "hey...how are you?"
Lauren:"Fine and you?"
Friend:"so so.....how I feel depends from what you'll soon tell me!"
Lauren:"What's the matter?"
Friend:"You know the guy you was telling me about the other day?"
Lauren:"Yes....and then?"
Friend:"Someone told me....,correct me if i'm wrong, that he agve you a date at his house and you accepted..Is it true?"
Lauren:"Who told you that?"
Friend:"It doesn't matter...I just want to know if it's true"
(No sound during these last beats)
"so?"
Lauren:"Yes,...it's true"
Friend:"Are you mad? you don't even know who he is!"
Friend:"Well I don't think it's your business, after all I am the one who has a date!
Friend:"Don't go, you don't really know ho he is...don't go...".
She continued telling her this, Lauren always replied saying " don't worry...", and at the end her friend gave in.

Lauren liked him and trusted him so much that she decided to go.
(recorded sound effect of an outdoor ambient with cars going on the road and some other noise)(the sound of someone walking in a street)
That day she left home in time. (sound of someone knocking at a door and after the noise of the door that squeaks) She entered in his house.....( a door opens) ( slowly the door shuts) Bang!!.........and never came out.

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